A while back, I wrote up a post entitled What Good is a Roll Without Butter? about my dear brother-in-law Jonathan and how we composed a poem over the course of two days via text message.
Another while back, my husband, brother-in-law, and I were out on a jaunt in the little ol’ white Honda, and composed the following moving sonnet. We alternated lines as we rolled down the highway.
My lines – will be in regular type
Timothy’s lines – will be in bold type
Jonathan’s lines – will be in blue italics
The willow tree lies barren in the glen.
Its leaves have fallen down to grow no more.
Its mournful beauty still forgot by men,
Who wander aimlessly toward beck’ning shore.
What memories it holds and tales could tell,
Of evil and courageous deeds of yore,
Of yonder church when peals its wedding bell,
And cries of men who lie upon death’s door.
Though endless ages used to pass him by,
His time on earth is growing rather short.
For all that carries life must one day die,
And age and time both ruthlessly contort.
So life, an endless circle, rolls along,
And still none heeds the ancient willow’s song.
In case you were wondering…yes my family is amazing!
© Rachel Svendsen 2014
Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Oh, wow! It’s so cool that the three of you wrote this poem together! 🙂
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Have you read the post about how my brother and law and I wrote the poem together? That was a fun time. 🙂 We actually played the sonnet game a few more times in the car together. It’s always fun to be the person who gets to chose what word the others have to rhyme to. I sometimes pick hard ones to make them squirm. :p
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One day, I’ll write an Italian sonnet with my grandchildren. And I don’t even have a. child yet. Buh seriously, your family is damn talented. How about lending your daughter’s for a nuptial contract so we can scribe an haiku .. winks.
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Thanks for the compliment. 😊 Perhaps when I have children we can work something out. *winks back*
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And still none heeds the ancient willow’s song …
and the willow weeps for
me … ks
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Pretty cool to have such a talented family. If I asked my family to help me compose a sonnet it would probably begin with the lines “There once was a man from Nantucket…” and the rest would not be suitable for publication!!
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😄
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Trying to reconcile this with the canned whipped cream shots to the mouth.
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love you. 🙂
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What is the most confusing about it? Is it simply the pass from bizarre slapstick type humour to the introspective philosophical ponderings of a willow tree?
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I LOVE your family!
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Me too. 😊
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Your family is amazing
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